tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post2440256120830150209..comments2023-08-28T08:28:57.052-05:00Comments on Mara Writes: The 99th Page BlogfestMara Nashhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14628961488068784772noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-76819483470177017562011-01-30T16:18:57.564-06:002011-01-30T16:18:57.564-06:00Hawt! without being overwrought. I dig it. I am no...Hawt! without being overwrought. I dig it. I am not a paranormal reader, generally speaking, but this really piques my interest! Thanks for sharing!!KatOwens: Insect Collectorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12228171304170449979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-11260330782302129382011-01-29T09:04:40.381-06:002011-01-29T09:04:40.381-06:00This is kind of intriguing. I like the dialogue, t...This is kind of intriguing. I like the dialogue, the tattoo.<br /><br />I don't often read paranormal or romance, but I'd turn the page.Perrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08485133856416996635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-16259453094521857232011-01-29T07:26:09.166-06:002011-01-29T07:26:09.166-06:00I liked it. As a huge sucker for bad boys, Shadow ...I liked it. As a huge sucker for bad boys, Shadow draws me in with his overconfident, sexy ways (yes, all that from one page). I'd read on.<br /><br />Marie, http://marierearden.blogspot.comMarie Reardenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13653459061863869033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-66683597975795944962011-01-28T21:18:05.960-06:002011-01-28T21:18:05.960-06:00I like the tension, but maybe just a little too mu...I like the tension, but maybe just a little too much description to hook me (then again, I've been reading so much 1st person lately, I might have been thrown off by not knowing exactly who the mc was). <br />ericaerica and christyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13074820593371226159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-78058307474809105022011-01-28T20:49:17.500-06:002011-01-28T20:49:17.500-06:00I like that she is so upfront. I like his reaction...I like that she is so upfront. I like his reaction to her. I would turn the page. Thanks for sharing.Heather M. Gardnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07232419331422866247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-47340946290423751672011-01-28T19:43:58.275-06:002011-01-28T19:43:58.275-06:00Yes, yes yes I would keep reading until the end. a...Yes, yes yes I would keep reading until the end. awesome<br /><br />Thanks for joining in on teh funErinnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13936046127305211439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-36713943599015213302011-01-28T16:34:40.191-06:002011-01-28T16:34:40.191-06:00Sexy and a debate about free will! Nice. :)Sexy and a debate about free will! Nice. :)Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15981159884498574786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-16384571342781370202011-01-28T16:15:41.552-06:002011-01-28T16:15:41.552-06:00Hi,
I'd like to know if he finally gets Holly...Hi,<br /><br />I'd like to know if he finally gets Holly, so yes I'd be reading on! ;)<br /><br />best<br />FFrancine Howarthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02326542867876257042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-45164309012813346992011-01-28T14:57:35.428-06:002011-01-28T14:57:35.428-06:00I like this a lot:
“Just because you don’t believe...I like this a lot:<br />“Just because you don’t believe in something doesn’t mean it isn’t so.”<br /><br /><br />and I'm really interested to see how you play out the empathy gift in this story. I'd read more ^_^Loralie Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07134452749240292803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-6949062150478879992011-01-28T14:36:21.255-06:002011-01-28T14:36:21.255-06:00Very nice, effective. I really like the way you ha...Very nice, effective. I really like the way you handled their attraction, keeping up the tension, drawing in the reader, but not overdoing it, not breaking up the flow. You gained my trust right there, and I'd want to read on to see what's going on with these two.Carolinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17889762915886434493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-88253405155483191722011-01-28T14:32:18.111-06:002011-01-28T14:32:18.111-06:00Ahhh! I can't believe you left me hanging like...Ahhh! I can't believe you left me hanging like that! What happens next? That was quite the sparking exchange. Great post.<br /><b><a href="http://nitewriter6.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Edge of Your Seat Romance</a></b>Raquel Byrneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12870113745683162915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-56916562434713987832011-01-28T13:47:01.276-06:002011-01-28T13:47:01.276-06:00Super interesting! I would've kept reading :)Super interesting! I would've kept reading :)Jessica Silvahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15405267450788581689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-46586153230123938532011-01-28T13:08:30.190-06:002011-01-28T13:08:30.190-06:00I'm a sucker for well-written paranormal roman...I'm a sucker for well-written paranormal romance so I'd definitely read on.<br /><br />Thanks for participating!Alicia Gregoirehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06660125614529633284noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-84750170682048428602011-01-28T13:02:05.547-06:002011-01-28T13:02:05.547-06:00I really like the way you write. I'd want to ...I really like the way you write. I'd want to start from the beginning though before turning to 100.Wendy Tyler Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10841984342368861282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-42918376405805869992011-01-28T12:51:43.316-06:002011-01-28T12:51:43.316-06:00I would definitely turn to page 100! I want to kno...I would definitely turn to page 100! I want to know what she says in return.Golden Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-34652918157854911142011-01-28T12:28:51.485-06:002011-01-28T12:28:51.485-06:00Whew! I'm fanning myself off right now. I'...Whew! I'm fanning myself off right now. I'd keep reading for sure. You're writing flows very nicely and I like your descriptions- I love the tattoos!Kelly Lymanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14773120663217816189noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-48333331980619656232011-01-28T12:16:01.914-06:002011-01-28T12:16:01.914-06:00Yes, I would keep reading. I have to know what'...Yes, I would keep reading. I have to know what's going to happen next!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16915603693944523761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-32210399696156485352011-01-28T12:00:32.481-06:002011-01-28T12:00:32.481-06:00I like her run away from fate song....and his gott...I like her run away from fate song....and his gotta love me dance. I would keep going to find out if they make a little music...grin. I like that she is focused on his tattoo, not his eyes, hair or cloths. It is a shy attraction overlayed with bravado that makes it work.HowLynnTimehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07888091432152130146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-76931609681302346282011-01-28T11:05:06.551-06:002011-01-28T11:05:06.551-06:00I didn't have any trouble getting into this an...I didn't have any trouble getting into this and I like the way your writing flows. Hot moment - I'd keep reading.Mary E Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13119298615414367828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-65983432620176306832011-01-28T10:48:06.876-06:002011-01-28T10:48:06.876-06:00I love your MC's name. Haha. Too few charact...I love your MC's name. Haha. Too few characters representing the Holly's out there! ;) I'd keep reading.Holly Hillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07901177289663629475noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-4364540938595521682011-01-28T10:37:17.046-06:002011-01-28T10:37:17.046-06:00This just screams paranormal romance! Probably bec...This just screams paranormal romance! Probably because it is. I don't know if I'd turn the page, though frankly, I love the writing. I really, really, liked your description of the tattoo. And you've most certainly got some good sexual tension going on here. <br /><br />It just don't think one page is enough to get attached to the characters.Angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12399082789777816445noreply@blogger.com