tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post374667321873014789..comments2023-08-28T08:28:57.052-05:00Comments on Mara Writes: At First Sight BlogfestMara Nashhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14628961488068784772noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-33659948231597031222010-10-08T01:07:39.624-05:002010-10-08T01:07:39.624-05:00Good entry. I like the part about his voice. I'...Good entry. I like the part about his voice. I've heard people compare things to molasses on a number of occasions, and have used it once myself I believe. However, I've never seen one talk about adding it to ice cream. It sounds like a strange combination and yet makes sense based on the description.Dawn Embershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00214560861614476799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-29139127190982585922010-10-07T17:05:59.066-05:002010-10-07T17:05:59.066-05:00what a chilling first impression! Great job :)what a chilling first impression! Great job :)JJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12710025691586074051noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-87661383490363310642010-10-07T16:42:29.965-05:002010-10-07T16:42:29.965-05:00Ooh...menacing, yet seductively charming. I love v...Ooh...menacing, yet seductively charming. I love villains like that! And molasses and ice-cream. *mmm...*J.C. Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01567971311643106302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-45398795228809585912010-10-07T15:31:09.251-05:002010-10-07T15:31:09.251-05:00Thanks for the kind words, everyone! I've trie...Thanks for the kind words, everyone! I've tried to make rounds of all the entries. Tessa, tsk tsk on the lateness but I'll come and check out yours too!Mara Nashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14628961488068784772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-82191305806441274602010-10-07T15:25:14.208-05:002010-10-07T15:25:14.208-05:00I also liked, "He may not like being human, b...I also liked, "He may not like being human, but he wore it well" :-)<br /><br />Good descriptions, well written.<br />Well done :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06181241692016438730noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-5425122653368142332010-10-07T14:47:28.257-05:002010-10-07T14:47:28.257-05:00Nice! Lovely work, my dear, but then your writing ...Nice! Lovely work, my dear, but then your writing always is. I'm about halfway through your script btw...<br /><br /><br />As for blogfestiness...I'm really late with my entry...yikes!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11046724975658216337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-73583354909802808062010-10-07T13:15:48.284-05:002010-10-07T13:15:48.284-05:00The hair went up on the back of my neck when he to...The hair went up on the back of my neck when he told her "Welcome home".<br />Great post!Cinettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11453731550912619157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-68384091869810152010-10-07T12:26:49.216-05:002010-10-07T12:26:49.216-05:00"His voice said it all." I shuddered as ..."His voice said it all." I shuddered as well. He's not human but he wears it well. His smile doesn't reach his eyes. Wonderful way to bring out how uncaring he is. Loved it! :DBrenda Drakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01263237745979525170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-75093706571126999012010-10-07T10:50:02.148-05:002010-10-07T10:50:02.148-05:00Beautiful, intriguing and well-written from start ...Beautiful, intriguing and well-written from start to finish. I want to read more!Tyrean Martinsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15356604721537744361noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-44787459198824077722010-10-07T10:40:56.579-05:002010-10-07T10:40:56.579-05:00Nicely done! You've created an intriguing intr...Nicely done! You've created an intriguing introduction to a very menacing character. :D<br /><br />JenJenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06683486631901017529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-693631731636917412010-10-07T10:32:45.896-05:002010-10-07T10:32:45.896-05:00Hi,
Oh nicely done and emotions running rife befo...Hi,<br /><br />Oh nicely done and emotions running rife before holly entered, then her father's fearsome charm to be reckoned with. I get the feeling things are not going to go as well for him, as he expects. ;)<br /><br />best<br />FFrancine Howarthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02326542867876257042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2679123027334100715.post-68061352601224917942010-10-07T10:30:00.729-05:002010-10-07T10:30:00.729-05:00Beautifully written and very descriptive.
Loved t...Beautifully written and very descriptive. <br />Loved this line--"His voice was like warm molasses dripped on frozen ice cream"Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07995267172282765794noreply@blogger.com